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Wednesday 16 November 2011

year 8 Buddhism

Year 8 students were asked to create posters showing their own 8 steps to a sucessful life or job, from the year 8 classes who completed the work we have selected some of the best.
Your homework is to pick your favourite from the selection and post a comment explain why that picture was your favourite. Think about using the word because in your answer and trying to write as detailed as possible. The best comment may even win a pize.











108 comments:

Anonymous said...

In my opinion, 'ROSIE'S SUCCESS TO BECOME AN ART TEACHER' to me is the best poster made from Year 8. Rosie has already demonstrated her imagination on the poster by making a wheel that can be turned around to see what she has wrote step-by-step. The idea was very well thought of and she was the only person from all the pictures that were shown to be the most creative and well thought of. The use of different colors were contrasting together and the writing fitted perfectly under the wheel. Another thing that she included was that she made sure that her wheel was inspired by the actual wheel of the Buddhists, the 8-fold path. Rosie has done very well on her poster, making sure that she has spent time on it clearly even when looking at it. Unlike many others, Rosie has made hers very simple and plain instead of flashing colors and unnecessary pictures, making her poster look very appropriate and attractive.
Wish you the best of luck Rosie, hope you get what you want,

Harris Ali 8C

Callum 8c said...

I think the 5th poster is the best, as it is very easy to use and get's straight to the point. Another good point about that one is that it is different to all of the other ones. What makes it different is the wheel; the wheel make the poster look more unique and also draws you in a lot more than just a plain poster. One of the down sides to this poster is that there isn't much around the wheel. This does make the poster look a little bit plain, but with more time this could defiantly be improved on.
_____
Callum 8c

Erica Boardman said...

I think the best one is the last one by Beth in 8B where she wants to become a doctor I think this because she has used transportation for her steps I think this is a good idea and creative idea because not many people would have thought of doing it and also it shows a good way of getting to her goal of what she wants to be when she's older. I also think this is a good way of showing your goal by adding lots of colours to make it stand out and beth has also put arrows showing which step is next so you know which part to read next
she has also put underneath her drawings how she is going to achive it so she knows what to do to get to each step. The one thing Beth could improve on would be maybe putting some steps before other because I thought that some steps were a bit mixed up.
by Erica Boardman 8C

Anonymous said...

i thought that the one with the dr dre beats on was the best since those headphones are bossaru and whoever made this will succeed


-jon, 8c

Anonymous said...

shanice 8y
i like the denist one because colourful and the writing very clear

Mohammad Atta 8x said...

I choose picture 8 because it is very easy to read in the style of steps and is very deatiled . It has a large title to tell you that it is that persons goal if you didn't notice from the steps.
Mohammad Atta 8x

Olivia Butler:D said...

To me the best one is subas "my goal" as she has said wha she needs to do in order to reach her goal just like budda had many teachings to help buddas today to reach enligtenment.shes also made sure her teps are easy and simple to follow and in all of them shes told her self what do and should be easy to reach in her case a dentist and buddas enligthment.shes use d approite pictures and drwaings and has made it look good and defently caugth my attention.
well down sabua
hope you:D

Anonymous said...

I think the best poster was the performing arts one by Emma Brice. I think this is a good one because it shows her steps clearly and also is very well presented. It is one of the neatest ones from the ones that were shown and was the one that caught my eye. It is just like the 8 foldpath but instead the goal is to be in the performing arts industry instead of reaching enlightenment.

Arooj Aftab 8C xxx

Anonymous said...

The poster I think is the best is Sabaah's because it is very colorful and very well designed. I don't really think there is anything to improve about this picture.
The poster shows that alot of effort has been in to it, also it shows lots
of skills and tecniques used to make this excellent.
-
Jeeten Patel 8B

Anonymous said...

The poster I think is the best is Sabaah's because it is very colorful and very well designed. I don't really think there is anything to improve about this picture.
The poster shows that alot of effort has been in to it, also it shows lots
of skills and tecniques used to make this excellent.
-
Jeeten Patel 8B

Anonymous said...

I think the best poster was by Sabaah because of it fabulous skills used to make it stand out and look very colorful. Sabaah must have put alot of effort into it. I don't think there is anything to really improve about this. The poster has shown very good drawing techniques.
--
Jeeten Patel 8B

Elise Penn 8B said...

Elise Penn 8B
The best poster to me is the mouth and the teeth because a lot of effort has gone in to it and the steps are easy to follow just like some of the Buddha's teaching's, it also clearly says what she would have to do to have her dream job and it is very colourful and bright.


Hope she wins :D !!!!

Shaan Sohal said...

I think EMMA'S STEPS TO BECOMING FAMOUS is the best poster, because she has used a wide range of colour, and it drew my attention from all of the other posters. I like the way she used steps to show the all of the stages. It is bright and stands out from the crowd =D
Shaan, 8x

Anonymous said...

I think the best one is the last one by Beth in 8B where she wants to become a doctor I think this because she has clearly made out what she wants to be and the different steps on how to accomplish her dream.The idea had clearly been thought out properly and she used the colour effectively which made the piece look even better. However the colours are not to flashy which makes it look a bit more professional. She has also included arrows showing which step is next and you know what part to read next. she has also put a little caption underneath saying how she is going to achieve it .
By Chuka

Anonymous said...

Sullyman
I think that picture 5
"Rosie's Steps For success to be an
art teacher"
The reason i think this is because of the wheel manly. It gives the idea of going in a cycle to achieve something. Very creative and very different.

Ryan Bates 8C said...

I think Sabaah's is good because she has clearly labelled what she wants to do and she has got steps like the buddhas so she knows what she wants to do. It's colourful too.

Mckenzie 8B said...

I think Sabaah's is really good because it is really nice and it looks easy to do and it tells you how she should live life like how the Sidattha did.

waleeed said...

the best one i think is haris becuase he has got the 8 steps like the buddha had to get to his goal like haris is to be a police man

Anonymous said...

I vote for the last one to be the winner the one to be a dcotr with the beds, because it is very nice :)

Sabaah Hanif 8b
--vote for my mouth dentist one--

Anonymous said...

I vote for my sister sabaah because it is very clear on what the goal is to be a dentist and is simular to the buddha's
zak hanif 8w

HARIS 8B HARIS said...

I think the last picture is the best because its clear colourul and shows realistic steps on how to acheive the goal and clear on what he/she wants to be it stands out and its clear in what to do like step by step also its very detailed even its easy to read not too hard to read its short and understandable for example going to collage you need right concentration thats why I think its good and if they DO follow these steps they will succeed to be a docter

Haris 8B Haris

Anonymous said...

I think that the Second poster is the best because it is related to Buddhism and because the Buddha said that by following the 8 fold path you can achieve your goal and the person who has drew this picture was obviously thinking about how he can relate it to Buddhism . To improve his poster he can make it more colorful and more attracting so people can look at the poster with properly .

Moazzam Khan 8X

Husna Saiyad said...

I think that Bethany Smith in 8B has done the best. This is beacause on her drawing to become a doctor she has shown that at first it is easy to complete things but then it gets harder. This is very good because some of the bhudda's teachings were more harder than others and beth has shown tha too.

Areeb 8C said...

I think that the 2nd one about the army was really good because it was neat and was put in good order of steps also the description of every step is excellent and she has a subheading for every step, the work does like it needs a bit more time but pictures were also added to make it have a good design and she has thought out every single step correctly especially in the "Achieve 5 GCSE's" section although unlike the other pictures the layout is a bit boring and maybe could use some elevating steps or a wheel to make it look more like a traditional Buddhist eight fold path, she could put a more Buddhist relating layout in the picture instead of a boring layout

Areeb Hassan 8C

Areeb 8C said...

I think that the 2nd one about the army was really good because it was neat and was put in good order of steps also the description of every step is excellent and she has a subheading for every step, the work does like it needs a bit more time but pictures were also added to make it have a good design and she has thought out every single step correctly especially in the "Achieve 5 GCSE's" section although unlike the other pictures the layout is a bit boring and maybe could use some elevating steps or a wheel to make it look more like a traditional Buddhist eight fold path, she could put a more Buddhist relating layout in the picture instead of a boring layout

Areeb Hassan 8C

Anonymous said...

my choice of the best one is emma heelys because she has done her goals step by step and by her picture i can tell that shes not like "full of her self" and its really creative and it will definatly benifate her in the long run because she is quite shy and it is nice to see that she has put thaught a lot of effort into creating a poster. umay nadeem 8x

Sophie Fleming 8b said...

I think that Emma Brice's piece of work is the best one because she has used lots of reasons and similar stages as the Buddhist 8 fold path. I think that she has used clear imagery and words to describe reasons and has a reasonable goal to be on a cruise ship because some people go for dreams that maybe to high.
Good look Emma ;) xx

Sophie Fleming 8b

Anonymous said...

I think that Emma Brice's piece of work is the best one because she has used lots of reasons and similar stages as the Buddhist 8 fold path. I think that she has used clear imagery and words to describe reasons and has a reasonable goal to be on a cruise ship because some people go for dreams that maybe to high.
Good look Emma ;) xx

Sophie Fleming 8b

Neve Keeble 8c said...

Neve Keeble 8c

I think the best one is the 8th one by Emma because it is clear and well presented.I think the steps show much creativity and I also think she has put in 100%I effort.It is very colourful and I like the steps idea as these also makes it very clearto follow.I think the steps to become famous are well written and clear to follow. The eight fold path has clearly influenced Emma in her work. I think she has shown her ability in her learning. The colours Emma has used are also very well chosen because they are bright and draw attention to the poster.

I think the only thing she could improve is to write about how she will become famous not examples of how somebody else could.

I think Emma should win !!!!!!!!!

Anna-Maria Herron said...

I think the best one was by beth because I like how she has put her steps into hospital beds. The Buddah wanted to help people and hated seeing sick, dying people so he would have wanted somebody to help the people in pain. God luck Beth hope you get your dream job! :)
Anna-Maria Herron 8x

Anonymous said...

I think that Sophie's music homework is the best because it was clearly explained and had good images to show what she was saying.
Katie Payne 8b

annam :) said...

i think that the one to go to the army is very good, because
it is a very big dream and a very big dreram to be succsessful in but if he has the right mind he will compleate it.

annam hussain 8Y

Anonymous said...

i think the 3rd poster is the best because it shows the steps towards there dream. it has colour and the drawrings are good

lucy reay 8y.

Lucy Reay said...

i think the 3rd poster is the best because it shows the steps towards there dream. it has colour and the drawrings are good

lucyb reay 8y.

Anonymous said...

I think that the goal to be a dentist is the best one becuase it has explained wy and how they are going to achieve there dream. i also like the teeth that was a really nice touch i hope they become successful
Olivia Guy
8Y

Anonymous said...

I think that the first poster is the best because it has lots of colour and its good design gives it a nice vibe. Also it has extrealmy good steps which relate to the Buddhism steps as they all relate to the ultimate goal Which this person wants to reach.
Hannah Bussingham 8c

Beth Walker said...

I think that Rosies sucess to become an art teacher is the best piece of work, because I could tell that a lot of time and effot has been put into this, i really like the wheel which shows you each diffrent stage that she will have to achevieve to become an art teacher. Its not too boring but not over the top.

Anonymous said...

I think the 'army' on was the best because it was colourful,the numbers were coloured in and the text was black,which looked went good together,they have used a lot of imagination and creativity,and it was a unusual dream which made it stand out from the others,the writing was clear and they had thought about the steps ,and has demonstrated all the steps.Its easy to read and get the ponits off.They have showed how it links to the Buddhists subject.Its also quite plain which makes it stand out more and makes it more appropriate they have spen alot of effort on this.
Tara Rosconie 8Y:)

ANDRES :) said...

The best poster was "MY GOAL TO BECOME A DENTIST" by Sabbah 8B (B is for best), Because it was clear on what she wanted to be and lots of time and effort was put into it.Also she showed a variety of different things that she need in order to become a dentist, with writing at a appropriate size for everyone to see, that stood out and contrasted with the white background (obviously!)and used a variety of different language devices suitable for her target audience (which was a chatty one!)which is why i think this poster was clearly the one that stood out most.

By Andres Volosyanko 8B :) (HOPE I GET THE BEST COMMENT!!!)

Mica Dey said...

I think the fourth poster is best because it is colourful, it is clear and easy to follow. They have written what they need to do to achieve their dream and drawn a very interesting and colourful picture.
Mica Dey 8Y

Emma Brice 8B said...

I am voting for the ‘army’ poster because, I can see that the person has set out the steps in a clear format, and they have well thought it through-they have included pictures from the computer, this shows they have put in lots of effort and time. (I think they have already taken into count the steps to becoming part of the army, ‘Put 100% effort into everything I do!!) Also, showing effort, they have taken time to research the steps of becoming part of the army:
‘Right concentration’-Be focused even through tough times (this is also linked to the Buddha’s 8 fold path -right concentration and so is right mindfulness)
‘Achieve 5 G.C.S.E’s’- they know the qualifications needed to become an army member.
‘Get fitter’-you need to be fit to be a part of the army!!
I think this person is an amazing part of society as, the dream to be part of the army is thinking of others as well as themselves! Thus, this person is just like the Buddha as they are thinking of ways to become a kind-hearted, thoughtful person that cares about others and protecting them. I hope this person can, like the Buddha, share their teachings with others, helping people to become better people.
I really hope this career takes off, good luck!

By Emma Brice 8B

Anonymous said...

MY FAVOURITE POSTER WAS SABAH'S IT WAS VERY COLOURFUL AND BRIGHT. ITS VERY CREATIVE AND SHE USED HER IMAGINATION FOR THE POSTER. IT VERY DETAILED, STEP-BY-STEP GET'S STRAIGHT TO THE POINT ABOUT HER DREAM JOB!
ANMOL 8X

Aasim said...

I lyk da dr dre 1 cos it has lotz of info nd tels u da realdream. It tels u hu da prson wants 2 be lyk

By Aasim

Anonymous said...

I think ericas poster on how to become a chef is the best because the steps are really clear and the coulours work really well together and make the poster look amazing.
GR8 JOB
Sarah 8x :)

Anonymous said...

I think rosies poster is the best because its a creative and different way of showing your steps also i think a lot of hard work has gone in and it took a lot of time.also its in big clear writing so you can see it clearly and it is well thought out. It also has a realistic wheel which yoy can turn so its pretty good

Humairaa 8c :)

Henna Ellahi 8Y said...

I think that Emma's poster is the because she explained her dream in detail and why she wanted to be a singer or dancer. She added some good pictures and had a good explanation. It had lots of colours and she has done her steps clearly and knows what she wants the future. Just like the Buddha.

Henna Ellahi 8Y

Emma Heeley 8x said...

In my opinion I think that picture 8 is the best poster because it stood out from the crowd. What made me notice it was how colourful it was. Also it was easy to tell which step came next because it was designed as stairs and also it was numbered. The use of different colours was good because they were contrasting and attractive. The writing was good as well because it fits in the box and it is readable. Altogether I think that this awesome poster inspires people to take longer and more care in their homework.
Emma Heeley 8x

Shuhan 8y said...

I think that The best one is number 5 and whoever made it would succeed because it gets to the point and it has detail in it

Shuhan 8y said...

I like the 5th one because its straight forward and it is easy to understand

Anonymous said...

In my opinion, i think number 4 is the best, this is the one with the mouth and teeth. I like this one because it shows very clear what the person wants to be and the picture is very good and detailed. The picture makes it very obvious, of what the person wants to be. Lastly, the steps were very clear and were done well,

Allina Zubair 8x

Yomna Habeeb :D 8c said...

i think ROSIE'S WEAL is soo creative and uniqe and its very simple yet the best one . i also like it becouse its a reachable dream becouse she is amazing at art and she it quite intelegant so she could be an art teacher
GOOD LUCK ROSIE ;D
yomna habeeb :D

Matthew Wardman 8W said...

i like number 1 because it is really attractive and catches my eye

Anonymous said...

In my opinion emma won

Anonymous said...

In my opinion emma won by Adam 8w

Anonymous said...

In my opinion, 'ROSIE'S SUCCESS TO BECOME AN ART TEACHER' to me is the best poster made from Year 8. Rosie has already demonstrated her imagination on the poster by making a wheel that can be turned around to see what she has wrote step-by-step. The idea was very well thought of and she was the only person from all the pictures that were shown to be the most creative and well thought of. The use of different colors were contrasting together and the writing fitted perfectly under the wheel. Another thing that she included was that she made sure that her wheel was inspired by the actual wheel of the Buddhists, the 8-fold path. Rosie has done very well on her poster, making sure that she has spent time on it clearly even when looking at it. Unlike many others, Rosie has made hers very simple and plain instead of flashing colors and unnecessary pictures, making her poster look very appropriate and attractive.
Wish you the best of luck Rosie, hope you get what you want,

By Ali 8w

Chris Shields 8W said...

In my opinion, the last picture is the best because it shows you how to become a doctor step-by-step

Anonymous said...

in my opionion the 9th picture by emma brice was the best bgecause she clearly shows what her goal is and ahe sshow it very good detail how she will achieve it. I think she has put her views across with some good pictures and reasonable reasons. 8w

Anonymous said...

in my opionion the 9th picture by emma brice was the best bgecause she clearly shows what her goal is and ahe sshow it very good detail how she will achieve it. I think she has put her views across with some good pictures and reasonable reasons. 8w

Anonymous said...

I think that sabaah's poster looks really good because the colour she has used stands out. Also because i liked the layout of her work with her steps pointing toward the teeth

abdul 8w said...

i think the 5th one down is the best because it has a lot of info on it and has been coloured beautifully

Anonymous said...

I think the one with the ladder is the best it is clearly the neatest and sshe/he put loads of effort into they could put ther name on it but then again it was good.


Ali 8w (;

Anonymous said...

I think that sabaah's poster is really good because the colours she has used stands out. Also i like the llayout of her poster where her 8 steps are pointing towards the teeth.

Anisah 8B

Rohail said...

I pesonally, think that 'Rosies steps for success to become an art teacher' stands out the most to me. This is because unlike the others it isn't too flashy, showing unneccesary information, and it shows all the steps in good detail. The wheel adss extra effect to the work because it is ery simmilar to the Budist 8-fold path.
Rohail Ahmed, 8Y.

Anonymous said...

i think that sabaahs is the best because it is really colourful and attractive.It has the right amount of writing and is easy to read and understand.Also she has written clearly what she needs to do to reach her goal of becoming a dentist just like the buddha created steps to enlightnment for buddhists who want to reach enlightenment today.
Good luck Sabaah:)!

Anonymous said...

i think the third one down is the best because it is colourfull and it has lots of ideas.

Daanyaal Sohail 8y

Anonymous said...

i think that that beths posters is by most the best because it shows the way she wants to go in her life. there is a use of different coulors which makes this exciting.

by connor peel 8b

Anonymous said...

In my opinion i think that the first poster is the best (dr dre beats).This is because it is very attractive and colourful. It caught my eye immediately!Also the person who designesd it explains how they are going to reach their goal in steps. Something that the person could improve on would be to put their name on the front!!
Aliyah 8c

Zarah Khan said...

i like the fourth poster better because it has a lot of detail and she has set it out so that you can tell what she wants to be without the poster having to say 'i want to be a dentist'.it is also very creative and looks attractive. she has been very specific about the steps she needs to go through in order to reach her goal. i thnk that the poster will help her and others realise the kind ofsteps you have to go through

Anonymous said...

i think that picture 11 is the best because it is a journey by car to places and i also think is is really creative.

Muaaz Khan 8W

Mariyah Naeem said...

I think Emma Brice's poster looks really good and very imaginative also I like how she's drawn the musical notes around each goal she wants to succeed.Each goal is detailed and I can figure out what she would like to do as she gives each step.
By Mariyah Naeem 8B!!! :)

Aisha qayum said...

i think the dentist one is really clear and colourful to attract people to loook at it. It has good pictures to go with what she wanted to be in the future. The colours contrast together very well.
AISHA QAYUM 8B

Anonymous said...

i think it is really creativen n.4
hasnain 8b

Anonymous said...

i think 3 is the best it is ver y detailed




usman 8w

Anonymous said...

i think the 4th to last person's work is the best because it has post it notes as steps and is very creative.

Anonymous said...

In my opinion, 'ROSIE'S SUCCESS TO BECOME AN ART TEACHER' to me is the best poster made from Year 8. Rosie has already demonstrated her imagination on the poster by making a wheel that can be turned around to see what she has wrote step-by-step. The idea was very well thought of and she was the only person from all the pictures that were shown to be the most creative and well thought of. The use of different colors were contrasting together and the writing fitted perfectly under the wheel. Another thing that she included was that she made sure that her wheel was inspired by the actual wheel of the Buddhists, the 8-fold path. Rosie has done very well on her poster, making sure that she has spent time on it clearly even when looking at it. Unlike many others, Rosie has made hers very simple and plain instead of flashing colors and unnecessary pictures, making her poster look very appropriate and attractive.
Wish you the best of luck Rosie, hope you get what you want,

Maisie Caton-Johnson said...

In my personal opinion, my favourite was 'Rosie's - to become an art teacher’. I chose this as I think out of them all it was very creative and unique. Its originality made it stand out from the others and caught my attention straight away. Her colour choice is simple yet effective and it works well with her chosen artistic style. Her poster is also easy to understand as she has included arrows. I think this relates to the Buddhism topic well as it gives clear ordered steps (I know this as I have seen it in class) this is important because she need to know exactly what to do. I this is a great target for Rosie to aim for as her art work is of a terrific standard and she always tries hard.
The only target I would give would be to maybe change the green to a blue however it still looks amazing with green!!!!!!!!!!
Well done Rosie..... Hope you win!
Maisie Caton-Johnson 8C

Sanna said...

My favourite is the Army one because it stands out and the colours are bright. I like the text because it says to help and respect others.

Sanna 8y said...

My favourite is the Army one because it stands out and the colours are bright. I like the text because it says to help and respect others.

Emily 8w said...

I think 'Rosies success to become an art teacher' is the best poster in my opinion. I think this because it is linked to the buddha in many ways. One way is the wheel is like the eighthfold path because it has eight different steps to success,like the eighthfold path does to reach enlightenment. It is also like the eighthfoldpath because the wheel on rosies poster is like the symbol for the eighthfold path because that is a wheel. The poster looks like it has taken alot of effort to produce, like the buddha has used alot of effort to create his teachings, the four noble truths, and the eighthfold path etc. I also like the way rosie has created a wheel which is different to any other of the posters, just like buddhism is unique and not like any other religions. The poster is also colourful and looks attractive which is like shrines in the buddhist religion. some shrines are clolourful and they things in them represent alot of things in the buddhist religion just like rosies poster does.
I think her poster represents the most things in the buddhist religion.
Emily Moody 8w

Simran Rai 8W said...

In my opinion i think that the Equine vet one is the best because it was produced on a ladder which personally i think is good. Come on Daisy!

P.S. Please vote no. 2 because that's my best piece of work ever!!!!!

Anonymous said...

I think that the equine vet one is good because she used a good layout.


P.S. Vote number 2 cuz its mine!

Anonymous said...

I think the first one was good because it shows all the different steps.
Aishah Ahmed 8W

Anonymous said...

Aishah said I think the first one is really good it shows how you can achieve things.

Anonymous said...

I think the first one was really good it showed what you need to be successful.

Anonymous said...

I think the first one is good because it shows how you can be successful by reaching your goal.
Aishah Ahmed 8W

Anonymous said...

i really like this poster because she has planned the diffrent steps she is planning of achieving and also the layout is very clear.


sanna akhtar 8w.

sanna akhtar 8w said...

I really like this one the best because it is well structured and the different steps are clear.
Also she has thought about her goal and adedd colour to her poster.

Anonymous said...

Daisy 8W I think my favourite poster was the dentist one by Maisy Johnson 8C because it was creative, clear, understandable and explained the steps well. Also I think she new exactly what she wanted and how she can achieve that. I think it is very important for us to have a goal to achieve and targets to achieve because it gives us an insentive for the future. She is an isparation to me and I hope she wins. Well Done Maisy. One thing to improve would be to explain why each step will help you achieve your goal. I wish you lots of look.

Anonymous said...

I think the dentist one by Maisy Johnson 8c is the best because not only has she been artistic, creative, clear and unique but it also shows her goal to be the dentist very clearly and also the steps she has to take to achieve her goal are clear. I think this is ver clever because having a goal and targets to achieve the goal gives you an insentive for the future. However one thing she could do to improve her poster is to begin to explain why these targets will help her to achieve her goal and also what her goal means to her. This would help viewers to empathise with her poster. Despite this I think it is great well done Maisy I wish you lots of look.
Daisy W 8W

Anonymous said...

I like sabah's poster "My goal to becoming a dentist" because it shows what she wants to be step by step, I like this because she has designed it with her own imagination, and the teeth give a great effect on to the poster and make it stand out from all the rest of the poster's

Mariam Khan. 8C

Anonymous said...

I THINK THAT THE FIRST ONE SHOULD WIN BECAUSE IT HAS ALL THE STEPS TO REACH YOUR GOAL
AISHAH AHMED 8W

Anonymous said...

I THINK THAT THE FIRST ONE SHOULD WIN BECAUSE IT HAS ALL THE STEPS TO REACH YOUR GOAL
AISHAH AHMED 8W

Anonymous said...

I THINK THAT THE FIRST ONE SHOULD WIN BECAUSE IT IS WELL DETAILED AND IT IS EASY TO UNDERSTAND AND IT IS ATTRACTIVE AND PLEASANT TO LOOK AT BECAUSE OF THE COULOR AND THE PICTURES.
HADIQAH AQEEL 8W

Anonymous said...

in my opinion, Sajida's steps to success is good because its laidout like stairs and clearly states what steps she needs to go through it could be improved by having a bit more colour.

simran Rai 8W Vote for Poster 2 or 3 because their mine and Sajida's 2's the best though.

Amreena Pervaiz 8X said...

I think that the one by Beth in 8B is the best because she has clearly metioned what she has to do to reach her goal. She has linked the steps in with Buddhism as she has written underneath what it links to in the 8 fold path. Also I like how she has presented her steps in hospital beds.

Amreena Pervaiz 8x ☺

Anonymous said...

I think that the best poster was Rosie's success to become an art teacher.I think this because the spinning wheel is creative and it is eye catching because of the bright colors are nicely contrasting.Also the poster is easy to follow because it shows you how it works and explains it.I think this poster could help Rosie in the future because it tells her all the steps that she needs to achieve to make her dream come true

By Amber Watson 8c

Anonymous said...

I think Rosie's was the best because it was set out very well and it is very clear to read.
Junaynah 8W

Nusaybah :) said...

i think the third one is the best as it shows steps to success and the presentation is really good :)

Anonymous said...

i think the third one is the best as it shows steps to success and the presentation is really good :)

Anonymous said...

Ridha Shah 8W


I think
the 2nd one, this is because it illustrates all the information about the picture and it is described very well.

Anonymous said...

I think the best one is i want to be a vet ladder. It shows enlightenment but instead of enlightenment its a dream.

josef kemp 8x

Anonymous said...

Dr Dre Beats

Descriptive and Colourful

Jacob Micheal Belson 8X

Yacoob Ahmed 8C said...

I think Rosies wheel for her job to become an art teacher is the best because it is very creative. It also looks like there has been a lot of time put into it

Yacoob Ahmed 8C

Anonymous said...

I think poster 3 is the best because its layout it could be improved with more colour.
Simran Rai

Anonymous said...

i think poster 2 is ery goodbecaise it shw that in the future she really wants that job and them are the goals se needs to do

HAFSA ALI 8W

Anonymous said...

I like the one Rosie has made because
it is very clearly and neatly presented.The best thing about it is the wheel and that make the poster stand out more. i also like how the wheel goes round one by one and shows
how she will achieve her target to be
a teacher
Zainab Amir 8c

Anonymous said...

Saif Ashraf 8X
i think number 10 is the best because it is simple and shows you the teaching of the buddha and it very simple to read

Anonymous said...

suhail 8x
number two because it has the steps two success and it starts from begginig to the end